The Kukai - a haiku contest, where each person submits a haiku, and then, becomes a judge. When all the poems are compiled in a list, the contestants comment, vote, and give scores to poems of their choice. One cannot comment on, nor vote for one’s own poem. At the end of the voting process winners emerge, the selection based on votes by the kukai’s contestants.
Tuesday, November 5, 2013
Happy Holidays 2013 -14
image from google
Dear haiku friends
Kukai No 47 was the last for this year, 2013. We rest in November, December and January.
We will begin the CKK year 2014 in February, we will continue with our monthly themes
Remember in December/January 'The Twelve Days Of Christmas' celebration at Lunch Break starts December 25th and ends 5th January; i welcome your participation.
much love
gillena cox (Founder/co-ordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai)
Wednesday, October 23, 2013
CKK #47 Results
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 2. Alegria Imperial, Canada; 3. Keith A. Simmonds T & T; 4. Zhanna P. Rader, USA; 5. Rita Odeh, Israel; 6. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 7. Bill Kenney, US; 8. Claudius Gottstein, Germany; 9. Kashinath Karmakar,India; 10. Ramesh Anand, India; 11. Yesha Shah,India; 12. Vinay Leo R.Bangalore, India; 13. Arvinder Kaur, India ; 14. Ajaya Mahala; 15. Paresh Tiwari, India; 16. Eduard TARA, Romania; 17. Angie Werren, USA; 18. Jayashree Maniyil, Australia; 19. Kumarendra Mallick Hyderabad, India; 20. Bouwe Brouwer, The Netherlands; 21. Robert Kania, Poland; 22. Diane Mayr, USA; 23. Sandi Pray USA
FIRST PLACE
13
early darkness-
on the wings of the egret
a hint of sunlight
--Arvinder Kaur,Chandigarh,India
Votes: 752*** Points: 23
Comments:
SECOND PLACE
12
unfinished
in early darkness
a robin's nest
--Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India
Votes: 55**** Points: 15
Comments:
THIRD PLACE
16
Early darkness –
rereading a letter
in Braille
--Eduard TARA, Romania
Votes: 241*** Points: 13
Comments:
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
early darkness
children's laughter
flashing home
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: 21**** Points: 04
Comments:
2
early darkness—
tin sounds
roll off a bread bin
--Alegria Imperial, Canada
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
3
early darkness...
farmers take advantage
of the moon
--Keith A. Simmonds,T & T
Votes: 221*** Points: 09
Comments:
4
Picture window -
the chrysanthemums swallowed
by early darkness.
--Zhanna P. Rader,Athens, Georgia, USA
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
5
early darkness-
the still sea erases
some footprints
--Rita Odeh
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
6
pregnant liquor -
gold cynidation
makes early darkness
--STOPS
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
7
early darkness
a neighborhood
of high fences
--Bill Kenney
Votes: 42**** Points: 08
Comments:
8
bikers' trip
early darkness
on the horizon
--Claudius Gottstein, Borgloh, Germany
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
9
early darkness--
a mad man talking to
a billboard girl
--kash poet (kashinath karmakar),Ind
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
10
early darkness
the children dragging
back home
--Ramesh Anand Bangalore, India.
Votes: 23**** Points: 08
Comments:
11
early darkness
my guiding star shines through
the dense canopy
--Yesha
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
14
early darkness lust
protests to be further black
night saturates...
--Ajaya Mahala
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
15
early darkness –
Deepawali lamps flicker
my memories
--Paresh Tiwari
Notes: Deepawali - literary translated to 'rows of lamps' is an Indian festival of lights, in which numerous lamps made of clay are lit all over the house. In the growing metro culture, these lamps have conveniently been replaced by electric garlands and yet, those clay lamps and the smell of burning mustard oil always makes us nostalgic.
Votes: 41**** Points: 06
Comments:
17
early darkness --
shadows beneath the trees
swirl
--Angie Werren USA
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
18
early darkness . . .
how slowly the breathing
drifts
--Jayasree
Votes: 411*** Points: 09
Comments:
19
autumn evening --
the clouds veil the sun
early darkness
--Kumarendra Mallick Hyderabad, India
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
20
early darkness
a yawn passes through
the waiting room
--Bouwe
Votes: 51**** Points: 07
Comments:
21
early darkness
road ends
at dawn
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
22
annual search
for the timer instructions
...early darkness
--Diane Mayr, writer
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
23
only a shadow
where the old cat dreamed -
early darkness
--Sandi Pray USA
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Tuesday, October 1, 2013
CKK #47
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty Seventh Kukai.
The Kigo is 'early darkness' Send one haiku using the kigo e-mail me
Example:-
October evenings
the Angelus bell shrouded
in early darkness
-- gillena cox, 2011
(first published at Lunch Break 8 October 2011)
Deadline for sending entries is October 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is October 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots: (votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai. After results have been posted, any comments
you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Tuesday, September 24, 2013
CKK #46 Results
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 2. John McDonald, Scotland; 3. Jayashree Maniyil, Australia; 4. Arvinder Kaur, India; 5. Sandi Pray USA; 6. Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania; 7. Diane Mayr, USA; 8. Claudius Gottstein, Germany; 9. Anitha Varma, India; 10. Vinay Leo R.Bangalore, India; 11. Paresh Tiwari, India; 12. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 13. Keith A. Simmonds T & T; 14. Kashinath Karmakar,India; 15. Bill Kenney, US; 6.Kumarendra Mallick , India; 17. Krzysztof Kokot, Poland; 18. Lavana Kray, Romania; 19. Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia; 20. Marie-Alice Maire, France; 21. Catherine J.S. Lee, USA; Robert Kania, Poland; 23. Pat Geyer, USA; 24. Angie Werren, USA;
FIRST PLACE
4
action film--
my baby's kick
in the sonogram
--Arvinder Kaur,Chandigarh,India
Votes: 173*** Points: 24
Comments: Direct, funny, and "sonogram" in line 3 is a nice twist.
SECOND PLACE
14
dark movie hall-
in my popcorn pack
someone else's hand
--kashinath karmakar(kash poet),India
Votes: 28**** Points: 18
Comments: A more straightforward word order in lines 2-3 would improve this.
THIRD PLACE
5
frames of war -
the color of blood
in black and white
--Sandi Pray USA
Votes: 251*** Points: 15
Comments:
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
PORUMBOIU -
european filmmaker
with big corn vitamins
STOPS
Note:"corn" in romanian is PORUMB, big corn = PORUMBOI.
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
2
adventures
in light and shadow
...all for a jam-jar
-- JOHN McDONALD EDINBURGH SCOTLAND
Note: (a jam-jar: price of entry to the local flea-pit in the 40's)
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
3
full moon ...
his eccentricities
on the screen
--Jayashree Maniyil, Melbourne, Australia
Votes: 13**** Points: 07
Comments: Suggests the magnifying effect of cinema. Identifying a specific eccentricity might have made this stronger.
6
outdoor cinema -
storm clouds
gone with the wind
--Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania
Votes: 4*1*** Points: 07
Comments:
7
lights come up...
popcorn butter stains
on both our pants
--Diane Mayr, Salem, NH USA
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
8
peacekeeping force
movie night under
the camo net
--Claudius Gottstein, Borgloh, Germany
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:The meaning of line 1 deepens as the poem unfolds: the movie as a peacekeeping force.
9
undeveloped roll
in the old camera-
a sepia world
--Anitha Varma Kerala India
Votes: *31**** Points: 09
Comments:
10
photo album —
behind a film of dust
smiles innocence
--Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India
Votes: 23**** Points: 08
Comments:
11
wilting irises -
I turn up the volume
in an empty house
--Paresh Tiwari India
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
12
installing VOD
I try to explain
huckleberry friend
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:
13
a film unfolds
on the station of the cross...
agony of Christ
--Keith A. Simmonds T & T
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
15
the black lips
of the femme fatale
film noir
--Bill Kenney
Votes: 241*** Points: 13
Comments:
16
mad mad mad world --
man wages war to
win peace
--Kumarendra Mallick Hyderabad, India
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
17
3D glasses –
dinosaurs already occupied
the first rows
--Krzysztof Kokot, Nowy Targ, Poland
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
18
season end -
the film star poster
buried in leaves
--Lavana Kray-Iasi-Romania
Votes: 24**** Points: 10
Comments: "Season's end" for line 1. The poster isn't buried, since it's visible; simply "under the leaves" would work
19
in the Old Town
Selling the violets
Indian movie
--Tatjana Debeljacki
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
20
red carpet -
my life's movie
flashback
-- Marie-Alice MAIRE
Votes: 22**** Points: 06
Comments:
21
nothing but pixels—
those Super 8 home movies
we used to show
--Catherine J.S. Lee Maine, USA
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
22
Harvest moon -
Shall We Dance
a Dirty Dancing?
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
23
still images
move 'cross the screen...
a critic is born
--Pat
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
24
blackbirds
in fidgety rows, movie-goers wait
for the lights to dim
--Angie Werren Amelia, OH USA
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
Sunday, September 1, 2013
CKK 46
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty sixth Kukai The theme is film Send one haiku on this theme e-mail to
Example:-
semi dark hall
pin lights on the stairway
i stumble anyway
-- gillena cox
first published at Sketchbook September / October 31, 2009 Vol. 4, No. 5
Visit also T&T Film Festival 2013
Deadline for sending entries is September 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is September 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai. After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Friday, August 23, 2013
CKK #45 Results
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Bill Kenney, US; 2. Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania; 3. Vinay Leo R.Bangalore, India; 4. Keith A. Simmonds T & T; 5. Ramesh Anand, India; 6. Pravat Kumar, India; 7. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 8. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 9. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 10. Paresh Tiwari, India; 11. Angie Werren, USA; 12. Pat Geyer, USA; 13. Arvinder kaur, India; 14. Anitha Varma, India; 15. Jayashree Maniyil, Australia; 16. John McDonald, Scotland; 17 . Sanjuktaa Asopa,
India 18. Irena Szewczyk, Poland; 19. Claudius Gottstein, Germany; 20. Cezar-Florin Ciobîca, Romania; 21. Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia; 22. Robert Kania, Poland
FIRST PLACE
11
migrating birds --
all the colors of
my skin
--Angie Werren, Amelia, Ohio USA
Votes: 533*** Points: 20
Comments: A superb haiku that actually transcends the "Afro-centric" category, even while acknowledging it.
SECOND PLACE
18
visit to a zoo
she hides her bracelets
of ivory
--Irena Szewczyk
Votes: 433*** Points: 19
Comments:
THIRD PLACE
9
fancy dress day-
today my child is
nelson mandela
--kashinath karmakar(kash poet),Durgapur,India
Votes: 72**** Points: 11
Comments: More than another "cute child" ku, this resonates, without inflated rhetoric, with hope for the future.
15
reunion –
only my cousins
speak Swahili
--Jayashree Maniyil, Melbourne, Australia
Votes: 72**** Points: 11
Comments: The everlasting mystery of the one and the many, within a family, within a group, within a culture; where, exactly, is the union in this reunion?
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
African-American
the long journey
from home to home
--Bill Kenney
Votes: 62**** Points: 10
Comments:
2
ivory trade ban -
upon new piano keys
"Lord Bless Africa"
--Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania
Votes: 3***** Points: 03
Comments:
3
soul sisters. . .
their colors forgotten
as they paint
--Vinay Leo R.Bangalore, India
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
4
rastafari...
a river of peace
down freedom road
--Keith A. SimmondsT & T
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
5
abandoned fort
the traces of its culture
in my beats
--Ramesh Anand Bangalore, India
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
6
fruit laden tree--
the earthly fragrance
rooted in Africa
--Pravat Kumar Padhy, India
Votes: *2**** Points: 04
Comments:
7
visiting
Wittenberg
I have a dream
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: 41**** Points: 06
Comments: I wish I could give 3 points for multiple layers of meaning but so many excellent and intelligent haiku here (“Intelligence plus character…”)
8
Center of the WORLD -
when continents only ONE
should've been somewhere
--STOPS
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
10
sunset boat -
rounding the vivid wake
of calypso beats
--Paresh Tiwari, India
Votes: 32**** Points: 07
Comments:
12
in a brier patch
spider and rabbit spin tales
threading old to new
--Pat
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
Note: I loved the information so I based my ku on it. "Anansi the trickster is a West African God. He often takes the shape of a spider and is considered to be the god of all knowledge of stories. He is also one of the most important characters of West African and Caribbean folklore...(read the rest of this note at Comments)
13
lovemaking--
the heaving rain forest
beside the Congo
--Arvinder kaur,Chandigarh,India
Votes: 211*** Points: 07
Comments:
14
continent
dark with mystery-
throbbing drums
--Anitha Varma, Kerala, India
Votes: 42**** Points: 08
Comments:
16
walking tall
the cane cutter's daughter
...once barefoot
--John McDonald EDINBURGH SCOTLAND
Votes: *2**** Points: 04
Comments:
17
Rum and Coca- cola-
colors deepen in
an African dusk
--sanjuktaa
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
Note: Rum and coca cola is a very old song I remember from my childhood. A friend's father, who was
in army, had this in his collection. I googled and dug out this song as i thought it fits with the theme and while being cheery on the surface, hints at something deeper on another level...(read the rest at Comments)
19
thistlefield
first day at highschool
wearing a Kanga
--Claudius Gottstein Borgloh, Germany
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
20
on Kwanzaa -
opening again the book
,,To kill a mockingbird"
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 3***** Points: 03
Comments:
21
Afrocentric book
variegrated colours and
a butterfly resting
--Tatjana Debeljacki
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
22
blues
far away from home
close to your heart
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
Thursday, August 1, 2013
CKK #45
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty fifth Kukai The theme is afrocentric Send one haiku on this theme e-mail to
Example:-
generations...
woven into a fabric
callled freedom
-- gillena cox
first posted at Lunch Break August 2011
Deadline for sending entries is August 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is August 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai. After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Friday, July 26, 2013
CKK #44 Results
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Pat Geyer, USA; 2. Rita Odeh, Israel; 3. Eduard TARA, Romania; 4. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 5. Keith A. Simmonds,T & T; 6. Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India; 7. Stella Pierides, DE and UK; 8. Robert Kania, Poland; 9. Lavana Kray, Romania; 10. Bill Kenney USA; 11. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 12. Dan Iulian, Romania; 13. Marleen Hulst,The Netherlands; 14. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 15. Angie Werren, USA; 16. Anna Goluba, Poland; 17. Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland; 18. John Daleiden, USA; 19. Catherine J.S. Lee; 20. Angelee Deodhar, India; 21. Paresh Tiwari, India; 22. Arvinder Kaur,India; 23. Sanjukta, Asopa, India; 24. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 25. Lucacs Sebastian, Romania; 26. Alegria Imperial, Canada
FIRST PLACE
2
moonless sky-
military raincoats hung
on a bamboo fence
--Rita
Votes: 661*** Points: 21
Comments: the "bamboo fence" used for hanging "military raincoats" suggest an impromptu arrangement
SECOND PLACE
24
Father's Day -
his raincoat still smells
of pipe tobacco
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 831*** Points: 17
Comments: conveys a fine sense of the lingering scent of Father's pipe tobacco on his raincoat--the haiku suggests the scent lingers after his passing-on.
THIRD PLACE
6
between him
and the grey sky...
tattered raincoat
--Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India.
Votes: 222*** Points: 12
Comments:
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
bands of heavy rain
play music with the wind...
raincoat chorus drips
-- Pat
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
3
Alone on the street –
it’s time to listen again
to my old raincoat
--Eduard TARA, Romania
Votes: 321**** Points: 10
Comments:
4
rainy day today -
at highest quotation
raincoats' quote
--STOPS
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
5
rivers burst their banks ~
two young lovers share
the same raincoat
--Keith A. Simmonds; T & T
Votes: 42***** Points: 08
Comments: I almost didn't vote for this one because the tilde is not a legitimate mark of punctuation, but in the end, I like this haiku better than most of the others.
7
summer blues
the cyclist’s raincoat adds
a splash of red
-- Stella PieridesNeusaess, DE and London, UK
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
8
it’s raining
Famous Blue Raincoat
on-air again
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 21**** Points: 04
Comments: Famous blue raincoat-beautiful song!
9
your raincoat -
one year together
from the day we shared it
--Lavana, Romania
Votes: 111*** Points: 06
Comments:
10
out of the mist
a red raincoat
headed this way
--Bill Kenney,USA
Votes: 111*** Points: 06
Comments:
11
first day at school
I will be famous once
the blue raincoat says
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
12
endless autumn -
from a raincoat in hanger
the loneliness trickles
--Dan Iulian, Bucharest-Romania
Votes: 321*** Points: 10
Comments:
13
summer storm
the sound of raincoats dripping
in the kitchen
--
Votes: 211*** Points: 07
Comments:
14
long raincoat--
the child's short steps become
even shorter
--kashinath karmakar(kash poet),Durgapur,India
Votes: 511*** Points: 10
Comments:
15
wind change --
we leave our raincoats
in the car
--Angie Werren;Amelia, Ohio,USA
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
16
Being in your arms...
I can finally take off
My raincoat
--Anna Goluba, Warsaw, Poland.
Votes: 3***** Points: 03
Comments:
17
rainy night -
in my hotel room I listen to
famous blue raincoat*
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Silesia
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
Note: blue raincoat
18
in this monsoon
my raincoat useless--
the scent of wet earth
--John Daleiden, Phoenix, Arizona
Votes: 23**** Points: 08
Comments:
19
sudden downpour—
without raincoats or boots
we play in the puddles
--Catherine J.S. Lee
Votes: 21**** Points: 04
Comments:
20
shoes in hand-
a transparent rain coat
all eyes on her
--angelee deodhar (India)
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:
21
sudden downpour
the slish-slosh of raincoats fill
our conversation
--Paresh Tiwari, Hyderabad India
Votes: 41**** Points: 06
Comments:
22
under the raincoat
drenched in farewell tears--
another monsoon
--Arvinder Kaur,Chandigarh,India
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
23
a puddle
below the raincoat--
how the day went
--sanjuktaa, Karnataka, India
Votes: 32**** Points: 07
Comments:
25
two years later...
in my father's old raincoat
a strand of blonde hair
--Seby L. Dorohoi, Romania.
Votes: 34**** Points: 11
Comments:
26
gusts
into my raincoat
a rain bath
--Alegria Imperial, Canada
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
Monday, July 1, 2013
CKK 44
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty fourth Kukai The kigo is raincoat Send one haiku using raincoat e-mail to
Example:-
fashion statement
raincoats are back...
caladium in bloom
-- gillena cox
(first posted at Lunch Break July 2008)
Deadline for sending entries is July 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is July 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots (votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai. After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Friday, June 28, 2013
CKK #43 Results
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 2. Tomislav Maretic, Croatia; 3. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 4. Ernesto P. Santiago, Philippines; 5. Keith A. Simmonds,T & T; 6. Pat Geyer, USA; 7. Robert Kania, Poland; 8. Donald Carlock,USA; 9. Tony Valenzuela, Mexico; 10. A.D. Jaden, USA; 11. B.S. Richards, USA; 12. S.E. Herrin, USA; 13. Eduardo Rojas, USA; 14. Charles Werdenhoff, USA; 15. Franklin Magalhães, Brazil; 16. Rita Odeh, Israel; 17. Bill Kenney USA;18. Irena Szewczyk Warsaw, Poland ; 19. Lavana Kray, Romania; 20. Marie-Alice Maire, France; 21. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 22. Angie Werren, USA; 23. Dan Iulian, Romania; 24. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 25. Ailoaei Cristina
FIRST PLACE
16
fallen petals...
drops of wetness gleam
on the stalk
Rita Odeh Nazareth, Israel
Votes: 232*** Points: 14
Comments:
SECOND PLACE
14
summer wetness
scents our rose garden--
your empty chair . . .
--Charles Werdenhoff, Joliet, Illinois
Votes: 431*** Points: 13
Comments:
18
wetness
of the painter's brush …
The birth of Venus
--Irena Szewczyk Warsaw, Poland
Votes: 132*** Points: 13
Comments:
THIRD PLACE
24
scorching day -
enjoying the wetness
of my dog's nose
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 222*** Points: 12
Comments:
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
wetness' witnesses
blody minded
mosquitos
--STOPS
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:
2
snažni vjetar –
jedrimo kroz mokrinu
u kabanicama
strong wind –
sailing through the wetness
in our raincoats
--Tomislav Maretic
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
3
fixing stars
the wetness
of grass
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: 31**** Points: 05
Comments:
4
of the paint
the wetness he confirms—
his last will
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
5
ominous black clouds
hover over the village...
endless wetness
--Keith A. Simmonds, T & T
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
6
pigeons dip
in the wetness
of street runoff
--Pat
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
7
mountain hut
wetness
and I
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
8
wetness on my shirt--
your passionate lip imprint
betrays us
--Donald Carlock, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
9
morning wetness
dampens the scarecrow--
his straw hair droops
--Tony Valenzuela: Mexico City, Mexico
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
10
my son’s handprint
wetness drips down window glass--
the playroom
--A.D. Jaden, Des Moines, Iowa
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
11
erotic memories--
the wetness of our love
haunts my dreams
--B.S. Richards, Sun City, Arizona
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
12
on the bathroom floor
the wetness of your foot prints--
domestic bliss
--S.E. Herrin, Des Moines, Iowa
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
13
monsoon wetness
drenches our outdoor wedding--
bliss among raindrops
--Eduardo Rojas, Wheaton, Illinois
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
15
Alongside the road
wetness shines on the stones.
Green moss and ferns.
--Franklin Magalhães, Rio de Janeiro, BRAZIL
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:
17
low tide
we leave our footsteps
to the wetness
--Bill Kenney
Votes: 13**** Points: 07
Comments:
19
a man cutting down a tree -
on the wetness of his t-shirt
Sahara map
--Lavana Kray
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
20
atoll's sand
vanilla beans braided
wrist's wetness
--Marie-Alice MAIRE
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
21
misty morning---
pine leaves dripping
wetness
--kashinath karmakar (kash poet),Durgapur,India.
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
22
wetness in the grass grackles test new wings
--Angie Werren;Amelia, Ohio,USA
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
23
tombstone
engraved by wetness
of so many tears
--Dan Iulian, Bucharest-Romania
Votes: *11*** Points: 05
Comments:
25
no news-
the wetness
in her eyes
-- Ailoaei Cristina
Votes: 31**** Points: 05
Comments:
APOLOGY: this poem was sent before voting started; however, i only picked it up after Steliana emailed me asking for a list. Steliana i'm sorry i really did not see your submission before; at the time you prompted me already more thank half the number of players had already voted, so i could not add your poem; i do hope this will not deter you from entering subsequent kukai here at CKK
26
Watercolors spilled –
In the floor wetness
Tulips bloom again
--Steliana Cristina Voicu, Ploieşti, Romania
Saturday, June 1, 2013
CKK#43
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty third Kukai; the kigo is 'wetness' Send one haiku using this word 'wetness' in your poem; e-mail to
Example:-
early morning
the leaves glisten with
an acute wetness
--gillena cox, 2008
first published at Lunch Break 2008
Deadline for sending entries is June 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is June 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai
After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Thursday, May 23, 2013
CKK #42 Results
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Ernesto P. Santiago, Philippines; 2. Keith A. Simmonds,T & T; 3. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 4. Sandi Pray, USA; 5. John Daleiden, USA; 6. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 7. Franklin Magalhães, Brazil; 8. Ana-MariaTrandafir, Romania; 9. S.E. Herrin, USA; 10. John McDonald, Scotland; 11. Lavana Kray, Romania 12. Rita Odeh, Israel; 13. Robert Kania, Poland; 14. Eduard Tara, Romania; 15. Vinay Leo R, Bangalore, India; 16. Krzysztof Kokot, Poland; 17. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 18. Seby Lucacs, Romania ; 19. Dragan J. Ristic, Serbia; 20. Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia; 21. Pat Geyer, USA.
FIRST PLACE
9
in her hair
a white gardenia--
the thrill of tango
S.E. Herrin: Des Moines, Iowa
Votes:272*** Points: 22
Comments :
SECOND PLACE
13
the ruins of the castle -
wild flowers
in the ballroom
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes:63**** Points: 12
Comments :
THIRD PLACE
11
dried twig -
origami flowers
bring it to life
--lavana kray -Iasi-Romania
Votes:43**** Points: 10
Comments :
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
privacy hedge
striking in a small globe--
star shaped florets
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments:
2
A waft of perfume
floating above the village …
weeping plum blossoms
--Keith A. Simmonds,T & T
Votes:11**** Points: 03
Comments :
3
abdominal
operation -- I listen to
ficus elastica
--Ralf Bröker
Votes:2***** Points: 02
Comments :
4
just me -
the sound of hibiscus
at midnight
--Sandi Pray; Robbinsville, NC USA
Votes:411*** Points: 09
Comments :
5
desert wildflowers
a brief blaze of color--
distant mountains
--John Daleiden, Phoenix, Arizona in the Sonoran Desert
Votes:*2**** Points: 04
Comments:
6
House of stone -
red flowers and a lamp
enlightening love path
--STOPS
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
7
Scent of gardenia
evening in the garden.
The other flowers sleep.
--Franklin Magalhães. Rio de Janeiro, BRAZIL
Votes:*21*** Points: 07
Comments :
8
rosehip blossom -
resting with no memories
in the sunlight
--Ana-Maria
Votes:41**** Points: 06
Comments :
10
hugging the hot stone -
a lone rose
dying of thirst
--John McDonald Edinburgh Scotland
Votes:211*** Points: 07
Comments :
12
fading song-
the rose petal settles
on a fig leaf
-- Rita OdehNazareth, Israel
Votes:33**** Points: 09
Comments :
14
Endless lullaby –
the scarlet pimpernel
closing its petals
--Eduard TARA, Romania
Votes:311*** Points: 08
Comments :
15
spring festival...
only paper flowers now
in a concrete forest
--Vinay Leo R, Bangalore, India
Votes:12**** Points: 05
Comments :
16
after facelift
will never whiter
the paper flower
--Krzysztof Kokot PL
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments:
17
baby's breath flower ...
the spinster still dreaming of
a white wedding dress
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca, Boto?ani/Romania
Votes:2*2*** Points: 08
Comments :
18
gust of wind -
cherry tree flowers wrap
her coffin
--Seby Lucacs, Dorohoi, Romania.
Votes:42**** Points: 08
Comments :
19
bending and trembling
of flowers so wonderful:
on the parasol
--Dragan J. Ristic, Niš, Serbia
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments:
20
dancing to the drum
mischevious gypsy girl
rose is in her hair
--Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
21
piece of eggshell
under the dogwood blooms....
the wait is over
--Pat Geyer, East Brunswick, NJ
Votes:11**** Points: 03
Comments :
---LATER ENTRY--- received while voting was in process---
life in pink ...
the wind passing
in the cherry tree
--Hélène Duc, France
Wednesday, May 1, 2013
CKK #42
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty second Kukai, the theme is flower. Send one haiku using this theme in your poem e-mail to
Example:-
May day
sweeping up ixoras
more and more
gusty winds
-- gillena cox
first published at Lunch Break May 2013
Deadline for sending entries is May 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is May 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines.
When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai
After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly
here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Thursday, April 25, 2013
CKK #41 Results
1.None of the comments are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1.Pat Geyer, USA; 2. William Kenny, USA; 3. Alegria Imperial, Phillipines; 4. John McDonald, Scotland; 5. Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia; 6. Lavana Kray, Romania; 7. Eduard Tara, Romania; 8. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 9. Rita Odeh, Israel; 10. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 11. Marie-Alice Maire; France; 12. Claude Lopez-Ginisty, Switzerland; 13. Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland; 14. Gabriel Sawicki, Poland; 15. Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines; 16. Robert Kania, Poland; 17. Ana-MariaTrandafir, Romania; 18. Diane Mayr, USA; 19. Sandi Pray, USA; 20. Magdalena Dale - Romania; 21.Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 22. Bouwe Brouwer, The Netherlands
FIRST PLACE
11
the closed door
back to my childhood...
key under a stone.
-- Marie-Alice Maire; France
Votes:553*** Points: 24
SECOND PLACE
18
beach stone...
the years spent smoothing
his edges
--Diane Mayr, writer
Votes:271*** Points: 19
Comments: A plausible and powerful juxtaposition, opening a range of intriguing
possibilities about the relationship of the speaker to the guy with the edges.
THIRD PLACE
2
sitting on this stone
where a wall used to be . . .
the gentle rain
--Bill Kenney
Votes:341*** Points: 14
Comments :
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
royal it has risen
from behind a stone...
pasque flower
--Pat Geyer, East Brunswick, NJ USA
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
3
spring mist--
stones rearrange places
in the empty tomb
--Alegria Imperial
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :
4
the mason smiles Godlike -
lion and lamb
from the same stone
--John McDonald Edinburgh Scotland
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
5
rusted metal
engraving the tone the letter
in the stone
--Tatjana Debeljacki
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
6
storm throwing a stone
against my window -
chipped moon
--lavana kray
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
7
Stone garden –
surrounding a plum petal
with sand ripples
--Eduard Tara, Romania
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
8
jumping over water
the stone
and I
--Ralf Bröker
Votes:132*** Points: 13
Comments :
9
etched on
a smooth stone...
the sun
--Rita Odeh Nazareth, Israel
Votes:43**** Points: 10
Comments :
10
rolling down blue
from sky onto bear's eyes -
rolling stones too
--STOPS
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
12
On Easter morning
The heavy stone was removed
And Life's eternal
--Claude Lopez-Ginisty
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
13
relaxing music -
on a woman back
basalt stones
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Silesia
Votes:12**** Points: 05
Comments :
14
midsummer dusk
still warm
the gravestone
--Gabriel Sawicki (Wroclaw, Poland)
Votes:2*2*** Points: 08
Comments :
15
Easter Sunday...
who will roll away the stone
trapped inside my body?
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes:1*1*** Points: 04
Comments :
16
how can I wander?
I have never seen how moss
has covered the stone
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
17
no stone left unturned
til He was found and felt
in the blossom breeze
--Ana-MariaTrandafir
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :
19
stone garden -
with or without me
dandelions
--Sandi Pray
Robbinsville, NC, USA
Votes:331*** Points: 12
Comments: The hardness of stone, the softness of dandelions, and the wry acceptance of
"with or without me" add up to a most engaging combination.
20
breath of wind
over the mother's tombstone
a butterfly
--Magdalena Dale - Romania
http://tankadream.blogspot.com/
Votes:111*** Points: 06
Comments :
21
spring fever -
rewriting my mother's name
on the gravestone
--Cezar F. Ciobîca
Votes:32**** Points: 07
Comments :
22
the wind flutters
between the gravestones -
distant landslide
--bouwe brouwer
Votes:2***** Points: 02
Comments :
Monday, April 1, 2013
CKK #41
resurrection image from google
Luke 24:2 They found the stone rolled away from the tomb...
Happy Easter 2013
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty first Kukai The kigo is stone Send one haiku using stone e-mail to
Example:-
a stone removed....
ants respond to light in
a crazy dance
-- gillena cox
Deadline for sending entries is April 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is April 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai
After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Tuesday, March 26, 2013
CKK #40 Results
image from google
(None of the comments are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated)
Players: 1.Diane Mayr, USA; 2. Rita Odeh, Israel; 3. John McDonald, Scotland; 4. Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania; 5. Alex Serban, Romania; 6. Claude Lopez-Ginisty, Switzerland; 7. Richard Hill, Japan; 8. Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia; 9. Keith A. Simmonds, Trinidad and Tobago; 10. Ernesto P. Santiago, Philippines; 11. Cara Holman, USA; 12. Lavana Kray, Romania; 13. Sandi Pray, USA; 14. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 15. Krzysztof Kokot, Poland;16. Robert Kania, Poland; 17. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania
FIRST PLACE #11 & 17
11
our last goodbye
pine trees shrouded
by the mist
--Cara Holman
Votes:27**** Points: 16
Comments :
17
abandoned chapel -
spiders weaving around Jesus
another shroud
--Cezar F. Ciobîca,Botoani, Romania
Votes:*41*1* Points: 16
Comments :
SECOND PLACE #7 & 13
7
in the garden,
an empty broken tomb,
shrouded in glory
--Richard Hill
Votes:*41*** Points: 11
Comments :
13
coyote bones -
will these stars be
my shroud?
--Sandi Pray Robbinsville, NC USA
Votes:231*** Points: 11
Comments :
THIRD PLACE #3 & 12
3
another young man
shrouded
in his country's flag
--JOHN McDONALD EDINBURGH SCOTLAND
Votes:221*** Points: 09
Comments :
12
mist shrouded hill-
nothing but a church bell's call
to hold on to
--Lavana Kray, Romania
Votes:221*** Points: 09
Comments :This one could be read in multiple--I like that!
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
shrouded gurney...
seeing only the blood
on the street
--Diane Mayr Salem, NH USA
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
2
white shroud...
darkness wraps
this twilight
--Rita Odeh Nazareth, Israel
Votes:21**** Points: 04
Comments :
4
last handful of sand
folded into the shroud -
widow's sore lips
--Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania
Votes:**1**** Points: 03
Comments :
5
miracle -
printed in our hearts
shroud
--alex serban; romania
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :
6
The shroud is no veil
But the luminous shadow
Of the Eternal Sun
--Claude Lopez-Ginisty
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :
8
we bring the shroud
emotions are crying together
paradise and the eternity
--Tatjana Debeljacki
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
9
Image of hope
in the mystery of pain …
shroud of Turin
--Keith A. Simmonds, T & T
Votes:*21*** Points: 07
Comments :
10
digging deeper
the shroud of language
seizes me in
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :
14
in his shroud
a breast pocket
her ring inside
--Ralf Bröker
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :
15
the mysterious shroud-
I’m on my way to Emmaus
--Krzysztof Kokot, Nowy Targ,Poland
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :
16
Shroud of Turin –
the Face from the past
and from the future
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes:11**** Points: 03
Comments :
Late Entry received while voting had already started
unfolding the shroud -
cherry petals covering
cheeless eyes of LORD
--STOPS Romania
Divine technology.
The Resurrection
frozen?
--Franklin Magalhães - Rio de Janeiro
Friday, March 1, 2013
CKK #40
image Shroud of Turin from google
Dear haiku friends you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Fortieth Kukai (the first for year 2013) The kigo is shroud
Send one haiku using shroud e-mail to
Example:-
under shroud of dawn
Good Friday processions
start a holy day
-- gillena cox
Deadline for sending entries is March 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is March 20th 2013
A voting list will be e-mailed to all players
Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt
the example given is just one of several ways you can allot you points
Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.
Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail to
The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai
After results have been posted, any comments you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post
much love
gillena
Tuesday, February 26, 2013
CKK FIRST POETS CHOICE
original image from google
CKK First Poets Choice lists 100 poems (1,2,3, places) spanning APRIL 2009 - SEPTEMBER 2011(a ten point scoring selection was used; 14 CKK poets voted; a highest-score of 6points was alloted to 4 poets Bill Kenney, Diane Mayr, Jacek Margolak, Rafal Zabratynski)
1
season of lent-
my shadow
thinner and thinner
-- Jacek Margolak, Poland
**********=0
2
the ash cross
smudged on his sleeve
season of Lent
--Michael Baribeau, USA
*1********=2
3
last day of lent --
so many spring blossoms
waiting to open
--Karina Klesko, USA
1*********=1
4
lent-
in the wayside chapel
kneel the prostitutes
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland
**********=0
5
Easter Day-
on my grandpa's cross
a sleeping butterfly
--Constantin Stroe,
1*********=1
6
nearly Easter--
new leaves flood
the willow tree
--Jenny Townsend, USA
**********=0
7
Many candles
in the starry night –
Easter Eve
-- Magdalena Dale, Romania
**********=0
8
Mother's Day--
her mirror refracts
morning light
-- Ralf Bröker, Germany
**********=0
9
Mother's Day--
a few graves on the hill
with new blossoms
--Karina Klesko, USA
1*********=1
10
mother's day
I step over
a crack
--Bill Kenny, USA
1**1******=5
11
Corpus Christi
a pregnant woman
climbs the church steps
--Bill Kenny, USA
**********=0
12
stained glass
tints my prayers
corpus christi
--Robin Beshers, USA
**********=0
13
In the street
a beggar eating bread…
Corpus Christi
--Magdalena Dale, Romania
**********=0
14
summer vacation -
camp-fire smoke
rising to the moon
--John McDonald, Scotland
**********=0
15
smile lines . . .
sand from her summer vacation
still in her purse
--Mary Davila, USA
1*********=1
16
A kite flying
above the schoolyard-
summer vacation
--Vasile Moldovan, Romania
*1********=2
17
summer vacation --
in the garden by night
the hedgehog and me
--Angelika Kolompar, British Colombia
**********=0
18
Summer vacation...
our sand castles destroyed
by the waves
--Magdalena Dale, Romania
1*********=1
19
beach fireworks
the last embers fall
into their reflections
--Catherine J.S. Lee, USA
**********=0
20
fireworks
over the Caroni River
a fine layer of ash
--Karina Klesko, USA
**********=0
21
fireworks -
the blind beggar keeps smiling
and playing the accordion
--Olga Neagu, Romania
**********=0
22
flood's end
through the rusty gate
a sunbeam
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
**********=0
23
a teacup
still in the doll's hand
flood waters
--Mary Davila, USA
1*********=1
24
flood warning
ducks glide past
a row of mailboxes
--Cindy Tebo, USA
**********=0
25
solitude . . .
turning out the lights
I let in the moon
--Bill Kenney, USA
31********=5
26
The first cry-
lights and shades
on the mother's face
--Vasile Moldovan, Romania
1*********=1
27
neon lights
the curtain's pattern
blinks on the wall
--Rafal Zabratynski, Poland
1*********=1
28
in the same pool
the sun and the moon
October light
--Juhani Tikkanen, Finland
**********=0
29
new year's day
the smell of pickled herring
on the cat's breath
--Cindy Tebo, USA
2*1******* =5
30
fortune cookies -
the same wisdom
as the year before
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland
1*********=1
31
hoping for the coin
in the cowpeas, ham, and rice –
a new year begins
--Catherine J.S. Lee, USA
**********=0
32
his fist full
of black-eyed peas
a gull's scream
--Mary Davila, USA
**********=0
33
carnival in Venice -
my shadow puts on
a mask
--Jacek Margolak; Poland
11********=3
34
carnival season
the condom machine
needs refilling
--Rafal Zabratynski, Poland,
*3********=6
35
Mardi Gras -
a little dog
wears sunglasses
--John McDonald, Scotland
11********=3
36
carnival in Rio -
girl with a broken leg
watching the dancers
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland
1*********=1
37
ashes
on my forehead
the priest's cold thumb
-- John McDonald, Scotland
1*********=1
38
end of the mass
an old man wipes ashes off
his bald head
--Rafal Zabratynski, Poland
**********=0
39
funeral -
on the urn with the ashes
yellow butterfly
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland
1**1******=5
40
windy beach
a small boy struggles
with the dragon kite
--Rafal Zabratynski, Poland
2*********=2
41
kite-flying -
father holds his son's
coat-tail
--John McDonald, Scotland
**********=0
42
windy day
the rainbow of kites
on a cloudless sky
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
**********=0
43
spring regatta –
a white kite catches
the salt breeze
--Catherine J.S. Lee, USA
11********=3
44
strains of Mendelssohn
the groom fiddles
with his carnation
--Cara Holman, USA
2*********=2
45
the scent of carnations
from a nearby garden—
evening rain
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
**1*******=3
46
so many
contrary feelings –
just a carnation
toliko suprotnih
osjecaja – samo
jedan karanfil
--Tomislav Maretic, Croatia
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47
autumn memory
of those walks with my father . . .
so many silences
--Bill Kenney, USA
11********=3
48
father planting
new violets
on his son's grave
--Juhani Tikkanen, Finland
*1********=2
49
Father’s Day . . .
I try to remember
his voice
--Mary Davila, USA
31********=5
50
My father's face
forty years later
back in my mirror
--Franklin Magalhaes, Brazil
2*********=2
51
summer rain
my umbrella
unopened
--Bill Kenney, USA
3*1*******=6
52
after divorce court –
still, she offers to share
her umbrella
--Catherine J.S. Lee, USA
*1********=2
53
drought -
my son is drawing again
clouds and umbrellas
--Cezar-Florian Ciobîca, Romania
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54
sudden thunder
we forget
our quarrel
--Marleen Hulst, The Netherlands
2*********=2
55
distant thunder
my children's room full
of whispers
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
11********=3
56
distant thunder
his big brother
seems smaller now
--Bouwe Brouwer, The Netherlands
11********=3
57
distant thunder...
the brush of cat fur
against my legs
--Diane Mayr, USA
22********=6
58
after the thunder
stillness...
then birdsong
--Cara Holman, USA
1*********=1
59
crack of thunder -
a heron letting slip
the scared frog
--Cezar-Florian Ciobîca, Romania
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60
twilight shadows--
the flash
of a bluebird's wing
--Cara Holman, USA
**1*******=3
61
morning light
a bluejay's scolding
breaks the silence
--Bill Kenney, USA
1*********=1
62
festival lights
smeared
on the wet sidewalk
-- John McDonald, Scotland
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63
kindling the flame--
one candle
lights another
--Cara Holman, USA
**********=0
64
autumn festival -
among the candle lanterns
a moth dancing
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
**1*******=3
65
row of lamps -
a blind begger sharing sweets
with his puppy
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca, Romania
1*********=1
66
funeral mass
her brief smile
at the bluebird outside
--Marleen Hulst, USA
**********=0
67
at my window …
a bluebird carrying on its wings
the whole sky
--Magdalena Dale, Romania
1*********=1
68
autumn wreath
the dried sunflower
feeds a blackbird
--Marleen Hulst, The Netherlands
1*********=1
69
New Year’s dawn…
on the top of the garbage
a Christmas wreath
--Magdalena Dale, Romania
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70
father's funeral...
the lily wreath
full of life
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
*1********=2
71
east wind
the paper-thin days
of the calendar
--Bouwe Brouwer, The Netherlands
*1********=2
72
new calendar
my wife takes
all the dates
--George Hawkins, USA
**********=0
73
winter evening-
the wall's whiteness under
old calendar
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
1*********=1
74
twelve new birds
in the ornithological lab -
new calendar
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland
*1********=2
75
Valentine's Day...
only cup of tea
warms my hands
Jacek Margolak, Poland
22********=6
76
late Valentine's day –
the beggar still hums
an old love song
--Cezar-Florian Ciobîca, Romania
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77
Valentine’s Day…
between the book leaves
a dry flower
--Magdalena Dale, Romania
1*********=1
78
old valentines . . .
memories of the faces
as faded as the names
--Catherine J.S. Lee, USA
1*1*******=4
79
first buds
the dream fading
as I tell it
--Bill Kenney, USA
1*1*******=4
80
her newborn’s fingers . . .
outside the nursery window
cherry trees in bud
--Catherine J.S. Lee, USA
11********=3
81
waiting ...
at the edge of the precipice
bougainvillea buds
--Ramona Linke, Germany
1*********=1
82
broken string
my paper kite disappears
in the sun
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
**********=0
83
clearing his garage -
our tin-can telephone
the string still connected
--John McDonald, Scotland
**********=0
84
antic shop window -
a spider carrying the moon
among guitar strings
-- Cezar-Florin Ciobîca, Romania
**********=0
85
old diary -
between two blank pages
a pink ribbon
-- Cezar-Florin Ciobîca, Romania
**********=0
86
old oak tree
a yellow ribbon
from a different war
--Bill Kenney, USA
**********=0
87
ribbons
floating on the breeze
Buddhist prayers
--John McDonald, Scotland
**********=0
88
wedding anniversary -
mom asks me to put on
my father's tuxedo
--Cezar F.Ciobîca, Romania
**********=0
89
golden wedding
a grain of rice in the pocket
of my tuxedo
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
**********=0
90
Somewhere, long ago,
a brown eyed girl
and my first tuxedo.
--Franklin Magalhães, Brasil
1*********=1
91
planting rice
the child on her back
soothed by song
Marleen Hulst, The Netherlands
1*********=1
92
after planting rice -
the stars fill the space
between seedlings
--Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania
**********=0
93
planting rice
her bare legs get lost
in the blue
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
1*********=1
94
footprints in the sand
her toes digging deeper
where he kissed her
--John McDonald, Scotland
*1********=2
95
evening beach
the tide washes away
his declaration of love
--Jacek Margolak, Poland
*1********=2
96
moving in
to my sand castle
the sea
--Bill Kenney, USA
1*1*******=4
97
The tempest…
white fallen plum petals
in the mud
--Magdalena Dale, Romania
**********=0
98
mud mask
the cracks on her face
when he makes her laugh
--Marleen Hulst, The Netherlands
**********=0
99
travelling carnival -
only a muddy meadow
left behind
--Tomislav Maretic, Croatia
1*********=1
100
dried mud in the pond -
the splash of Basho's frog
only in my mind
-- Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania
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APRIL 2009 - SEPTEMBER 2011