Friday, June 28, 2013

CKK #43 Results


1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers


Players: 1. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 2. Tomislav Maretic, Croatia; 3. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 4. Ernesto P. Santiago, Philippines; 5. Keith A. Simmonds,T & T; 6. Pat Geyer, USA; 7. Robert Kania, Poland; 8. Donald Carlock,USA; 9. Tony Valenzuela, Mexico; 10. A.D. Jaden, USA; 11. B.S. Richards, USA; 12. S.E. Herrin, USA; 13. Eduardo Rojas, USA; 14. Charles Werdenhoff, USA; 15. Franklin Magalhães, Brazil; 16. Rita Odeh, Israel; 17. Bill Kenney USA;18. Irena Szewczyk Warsaw, Poland ; 19. Lavana Kray, Romania; 20. Marie-Alice Maire, France; 21. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 22. Angie Werren, USA; 23. Dan Iulian, Romania; 24. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 25. Ailoaei Cristina


FIRST PLACE

16
fallen petals...
drops of wetness gleam
on the stalk
Rita Odeh Nazareth, Israel
Votes: 232*** Points: 14
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SECOND PLACE
14
summer wetness
scents our rose garden--
your empty chair . . .
--Charles Werdenhoff, Joliet, Illinois
Votes: 431*** Points: 13
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18
wetness
of the painter's brush …
The birth of Venus
--Irena Szewczyk Warsaw, Poland
Votes: 132*** Points: 13
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THIRD PLACE

24
scorching day -
enjoying the wetness
of my dog's nose
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 222*** Points: 12
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RESULTS CONTINUES

1
wetness' witnesses
blody minded
mosquitos
--STOPS
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
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2
snažni vjetar –
jedrimo kroz mokrinu
u kabanicama


strong wind –
sailing through the wetness
in our raincoats
--Tomislav Maretic
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
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3
fixing stars
the wetness
of grass
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: 31**** Points: 05
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4
of the paint
the wetness he confirms—
his last will
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
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5
ominous black clouds
hover over the village...
endless wetness
--Keith A. Simmonds, T & T
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
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6
pigeons dip
in the wetness
of street runoff
--Pat
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
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7
mountain hut
wetness
and I
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: ****** Points: 00
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8
wetness on my shirt--
your passionate lip imprint
betrays us
--Donald Carlock, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
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9
morning wetness
dampens the scarecrow--
his straw hair droops
--Tony Valenzuela: Mexico City, Mexico
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
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10
my son’s handprint
wetness drips down window glass--
the playroom
--A.D. Jaden, Des Moines, Iowa
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
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11
erotic memories--
the wetness of our love
haunts my dreams
--B.S. Richards, Sun City, Arizona
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
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12
on the bathroom floor
the wetness of your foot prints--
domestic bliss
--S.E. Herrin, Des Moines, Iowa
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
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13
monsoon wetness
drenches our outdoor wedding--
bliss among raindrops
--Eduardo Rojas, Wheaton, Illinois
Votes: ****** Points: 00
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15
Alongside the road
wetness shines on the stones.
Green moss and ferns.
--Franklin Magalhães, Rio de Janeiro, BRAZIL
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
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17
low tide
we leave our footsteps
to the wetness
--Bill Kenney
Votes: 13**** Points: 07
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19
a man cutting down a tree -
on the wetness of his t-shirt
Sahara map
--Lavana Kray
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
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20
atoll's sand
vanilla beans braided
wrist's wetness
--Marie-Alice MAIRE
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
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21
misty morning---
pine leaves dripping
wetness
--kashinath karmakar (kash poet),Durgapur,India.
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
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22
wetness in the grass grackles test new wings
--Angie Werren;Amelia, Ohio,USA
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
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23
tombstone
engraved by wetness
of so many tears
--Dan Iulian, Bucharest-Romania
Votes: *11*** Points: 05
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25
no news-
the wetness
in her eyes
-- Ailoaei Cristina
Votes: 31**** Points: 05
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APOLOGY: this poem was sent before voting started; however, i only picked it up after Steliana emailed me asking for a list. Steliana i'm sorry i really did not see your submission before; at the time you prompted me already more thank half the number of players had already voted, so i could not add your poem; i do hope this will not deter you from entering subsequent kukai here at CKK

26
Watercolors spilled –
In the floor wetness
Tulips bloom again
--Steliana Cristina Voicu, Ploieşti, Romania

7 comments:

  1. CKK welcomes: A.D. Jaden, Angie Werren, B.S. Richards, Charles Werdenhoff, Donald Carlock, Eduardo Rojas, Kashinath Karmakar, Steliana Cristina Voicu, Tony Valenzuela. To view our very first kukai
    CLICK HERE

    8 players did not vote; and only 1 new player voted; however, Steliana, whose poem, i neglected to include; offered a guest vote; leaving the kukai with 7 still outstanding votes. Thank you Steliana for being such a good sport

    Thanks to all participants for making CKK#43 a success

    much love
    gillena cox; founder/co-ordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai

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    1. thank you, gillena!
      it was fun!

      :)
      Angie

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  2. 6 pts. 4 CEZAR from Cristina with love

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  3. thank you for cheering on Cristina


    much love...

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  4. Oops! Line 2 of "low tide" should have read "footprints." My bad.

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  5. Angie

    looking forward to seeing you in the next kukai

    much love...

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  6. Bill

    made interesting reading though


    much love...

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