
1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 2. Tomislav Maretic, Croatia; 3. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 4. Ernesto P. Santiago, Philippines; 5. Keith A. Simmonds,T & T; 6. Pat Geyer, USA; 7. Robert Kania, Poland; 8. Donald Carlock,USA; 9. Tony Valenzuela, Mexico; 10. A.D. Jaden, USA; 11. B.S. Richards, USA; 12. S.E. Herrin, USA; 13. Eduardo Rojas, USA; 14. Charles Werdenhoff, USA; 15. Franklin Magalhães, Brazil; 16. Rita Odeh, Israel; 17. Bill Kenney USA;18. Irena Szewczyk Warsaw, Poland ; 19. Lavana Kray, Romania; 20. Marie-Alice Maire, France; 21. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 22. Angie Werren, USA; 23. Dan Iulian, Romania; 24. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 25. Ailoaei Cristina
FIRST PLACE
16
fallen petals...
drops of wetness gleam
on the stalk
Rita Odeh Nazareth, Israel
Votes: 232*** Points: 14
Comments:
SECOND PLACE
14
summer wetness
scents our rose garden--
your empty chair . . .
--Charles Werdenhoff, Joliet, Illinois
Votes: 431*** Points: 13
Comments:
18
wetness
of the painter's brush …
The birth of Venus
--Irena Szewczyk Warsaw, Poland
Votes: 132*** Points: 13
Comments:
THIRD PLACE
24
scorching day -
enjoying the wetness
of my dog's nose
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 222*** Points: 12
Comments:
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
wetness' witnesses
blody minded
mosquitos
--STOPS
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:
2
snažni vjetar –
jedrimo kroz mokrinu
u kabanicama
strong wind –
sailing through the wetness
in our raincoats
--Tomislav Maretic
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
3
fixing stars
the wetness
of grass
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: 31**** Points: 05
Comments:
4
of the paint
the wetness he confirms—
his last will
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
5
ominous black clouds
hover over the village...
endless wetness
--Keith A. Simmonds, T & T
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
6
pigeons dip
in the wetness
of street runoff
--Pat
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
7
mountain hut
wetness
and I
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
8
wetness on my shirt--
your passionate lip imprint
betrays us
--Donald Carlock, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
9
morning wetness
dampens the scarecrow--
his straw hair droops
--Tony Valenzuela: Mexico City, Mexico
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:
10
my son’s handprint
wetness drips down window glass--
the playroom
--A.D. Jaden, Des Moines, Iowa
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
11
erotic memories--
the wetness of our love
haunts my dreams
--B.S. Richards, Sun City, Arizona
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
12
on the bathroom floor
the wetness of your foot prints--
domestic bliss
--S.E. Herrin, Des Moines, Iowa
Votes: *1**** Points: 02
Comments:
13
monsoon wetness
drenches our outdoor wedding--
bliss among raindrops
--Eduardo Rojas, Wheaton, Illinois
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
15
Alongside the road
wetness shines on the stones.
Green moss and ferns.
--Franklin Magalhães, Rio de Janeiro, BRAZIL
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:
17
low tide
we leave our footsteps
to the wetness
--Bill Kenney
Votes: 13**** Points: 07
Comments:
19
a man cutting down a tree -
on the wetness of his t-shirt
Sahara map
--Lavana Kray
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
20
atoll's sand
vanilla beans braided
wrist's wetness
--Marie-Alice MAIRE
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:
21
misty morning---
pine leaves dripping
wetness
--kashinath karmakar (kash poet),Durgapur,India.
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:
22
wetness in the grass grackles test new wings
--Angie Werren;Amelia, Ohio,USA
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:
23
tombstone
engraved by wetness
of so many tears
--Dan Iulian, Bucharest-Romania
Votes: *11*** Points: 05
Comments:
25
no news-
the wetness
in her eyes
-- Ailoaei Cristina
Votes: 31**** Points: 05
Comments:
APOLOGY: this poem was sent before voting started; however, i only picked it up after Steliana emailed me asking for a list. Steliana i'm sorry i really did not see your submission before; at the time you prompted me already more thank half the number of players had already voted, so i could not add your poem; i do hope this will not deter you from entering subsequent kukai here at CKK
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Watercolors spilled –
In the floor wetness
Tulips bloom again
--Steliana Cristina Voicu, Ploieşti, Romania
CKK welcomes: A.D. Jaden, Angie Werren, B.S. Richards, Charles Werdenhoff, Donald Carlock, Eduardo Rojas, Kashinath Karmakar, Steliana Cristina Voicu, Tony Valenzuela. To view our very first kukai
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8 players did not vote; and only 1 new player voted; however, Steliana, whose poem, i neglected to include; offered a guest vote; leaving the kukai with 7 still outstanding votes. Thank you Steliana for being such a good sport
Thanks to all participants for making CKK#43 a success
much love
gillena cox; founder/co-ordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai
thank you, gillena!
Deleteit was fun!
:)
Angie
6 pts. 4 CEZAR from Cristina with love
ReplyDeletethank you for cheering on Cristina
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Oops! Line 2 of "low tide" should have read "footprints." My bad.
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ReplyDeletelooking forward to seeing you in the next kukai
much love...
Bill
ReplyDeletemade interesting reading though
much love...
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