Friday, July 26, 2013

CKK #44 Results




1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers


Players: 1. Pat Geyer, USA; 2. Rita Odeh, Israel; 3. Eduard TARA, Romania; 4. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 5. Keith A. Simmonds,T & T; 6. Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India; 7. Stella Pierides, DE and UK; 8. Robert Kania, Poland; 9. Lavana Kray, Romania; 10. Bill Kenney USA; 11. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 12. Dan Iulian, Romania; 13. Marleen Hulst,The Netherlands; 14. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 15. Angie Werren, USA; 16. Anna Goluba, Poland; 17. Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland; 18. John Daleiden, USA; 19. Catherine J.S. Lee; 20. Angelee Deodhar, India; 21. Paresh Tiwari, India; 22. Arvinder Kaur,India; 23. Sanjukta, Asopa, India; 24. Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 25. Lucacs Sebastian, Romania; 26. Alegria Imperial, Canada


FIRST PLACE

2
moonless sky-
military raincoats hung
on a bamboo fence
--Rita
Votes: 661*** Points: 21
Comments: the "bamboo fence" used for hanging "military raincoats" suggest an impromptu arrangement


SECOND PLACE

24
Father's Day -
his raincoat still smells
of pipe tobacco
--Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 831*** Points: 17
Comments: conveys a fine sense of the lingering scent of Father's pipe tobacco on his raincoat--the haiku suggests the scent lingers after his passing-on.


THIRD PLACE

6
between him
and the grey sky...
tattered raincoat
--Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India.
Votes: 222*** Points: 12
Comments:



RESULTS CONTINUES

1
bands of heavy rain
play music with the wind...
raincoat chorus drips
-- Pat
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


3
Alone on the street –
it’s time to listen again
to my old raincoat
--Eduard TARA, Romania
Votes: 321**** Points: 10
Comments:


4
rainy day today -
at highest quotation
raincoats' quote
--STOPS
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


5
rivers burst their banks ~
two young lovers share
the same raincoat
--Keith A. Simmonds; T & T
Votes: 42***** Points: 08
Comments: I almost didn't vote for this one because the tilde is not a legitimate mark of punctuation, but in the end, I like this haiku better than most of the others.


7
summer blues
the cyclist’s raincoat adds
a splash of red
-- Stella PieridesNeusaess, DE and London, UK
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:


8
it’s raining
Famous Blue Raincoat
on-air again
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 21**** Points: 04
Comments: Famous blue raincoat-beautiful song!


9
your raincoat -
one year together
from the day we shared it
--Lavana, Romania
Votes: 111*** Points: 06
Comments:


10
out of the mist
a red raincoat
headed this way
--Bill Kenney,USA
Votes: 111*** Points: 06
Comments:


11
first day at school
I will be famous once
the blue raincoat says
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


12
endless autumn -
from a raincoat in hanger
the loneliness trickles
--Dan Iulian, Bucharest-Romania
Votes: 321*** Points: 10
Comments:


13
summer storm
the sound of raincoats dripping
in the kitchen
--Marleen Hulst,The Netherlands
Votes: 211*** Points: 07
Comments:


14
long raincoat--
the child's short steps become
even shorter
--kashinath karmakar(kash poet),Durgapur,India
Votes: 511*** Points: 10
Comments:


15
wind change --
we leave our raincoats
in the car
--Angie Werren;Amelia, Ohio,USA
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:


16
Being in your arms...
I can finally take off
My raincoat
--Anna Goluba, Warsaw, Poland.
Votes: 3***** Points: 03
Comments:


17
rainy night -
in my hotel room I listen to
famous blue raincoat*
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Silesia
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:
Note: blue raincoat


18
in this monsoon
my raincoat useless--
the scent of wet earth
--John Daleiden, Phoenix, Arizona
Votes: 23**** Points: 08
Comments:


19
sudden downpour—
without raincoats or boots
we play in the puddles
--Catherine J.S. Lee
Votes: 21**** Points: 04
Comments:


20
shoes in hand-
a transparent rain coat
all eyes on her
--angelee deodhar (India)
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:


21
sudden downpour
the slish-slosh of raincoats fill
our conversation
--Paresh Tiwari, Hyderabad India
Votes: 41**** Points: 06
Comments:


22
under the raincoat
drenched in farewell tears--
another monsoon
--Arvinder Kaur,Chandigarh,India
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:


23
a puddle
below the raincoat--
how the day went
--sanjuktaa, Karnataka, India
Votes: 32**** Points: 07
Comments:


25
two years later...
in my father's old raincoat
a strand of blonde hair
--Seby L. Dorohoi, Romania.
Votes: 34**** Points: 11
Comments:


26
gusts
into my raincoat
a rain bath
--Alegria Imperial, Canada
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:

3 comments:

  1. CKK welcomes: Anna Goluba, Paresh Tiwari, Lucacs Sebastian. To view our very first kukai CLICK HERE

    Thanks to all participants for making CKK#44 a success

    much love
    gillena cox; founder/co-ordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai

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  2. thank you, gillena!
    congrats to everyone!

    angie :)

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  3. Congrats to our Bill Kenney, he placed first at The Shiki Kukai July 2013; Kigo :EVENING GLOW

    "clouds at sunset . . .
    the things we promise
    to remember"


    much love...

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