Thursday, August 28, 2014

CKK #53 Results



1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers

Players: 1. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 2. Archana Kapoor Nagpal, India; 3. Tomislav Maretic, Croatia; 4. Opie Houston, USA; 5. Shloka Shankar, India; 6. Joey Connolly, Northern Marianas Islands; 7. Keith A. Simmonds, France; 8. Richard Jodoin, Canada; 9. Neelam Dadhwal , India; 10. Quentin Clingerman USA; 11. Claude Lopez-ginisty, Switzerland; 12. Yanda Cox, Trinidad and Tobago; 13. John McDonald, Scotland; 14. Devin Harrison, Canada; 15. Susan Burch Hagerstown, USA; 16. Yesha Shah, India; 17. Shrikaanth Krishnamurthy, UK; 18. Robert Kania, Poland;


FIRST PLACE

5
eraser –
my mother's mistakes
no longer mine
--Shloka Shankar, India
Votes: 342**1 Points: 23
Comments: 1. love the sense of the child in the grownup; 2. An eraser for reflection nice thought.


SECOND PLACE

14
after all is said--
staring into the glow
of a dying fire
---Devin Harrison - Vancouver Island, Canada
Votes: 223*** Points: 15
Comments: A sabi mood...


THIRD PLACE

2
summer greetings --
once again water lilies
float on the clouds
--(Archana Kapoor Nagpal, Bangalore, India)
Votes: 311*** Points: 08
Comments: lovely visible juxtaposition



RESULTS CONTINUES

1
Pegasus welcomed
on Afro Diaspora
by the Sankofa
--sTOPs DRIDIH550 Romania
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:


3
tamboo bamboo –
this rhythm of bodies
and the ground
--Tom
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:


4
kneeling by the stream
my black friend and I reflect...
my white shame
--opie houston
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:


6
moonlight and lovers
scattered in the ocean
supermoon tonight
--Joey Connolly
Votes: 12**** Points: 05
Comments:


7
time of unity
in the face of disaster...
hurricane Janet
--Keith A. SIMMONDS, Rodez, FRANCE
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:


8
In my looking glass
wrinkles become the future
adventurous wit
--Richard Jodoin (Montréal, Canada)
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:


9
old prayed flowers...
a kid takes them past
the stagnant pond
--Neelam Dadhwal, India
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


10
Learning a, b, cs
Writing poems from the heart
Wordchimes.com grows
---Quentin Clingerman
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:


11
I look at the past
I see the roots of Future
In my present life
--Claude Lopez-Ginisty
Votes: 2***** Points: 02
Comments:


12
Dusk following dawn
Committing every day
Learning from the last
--Yanz
Votes: 111*** Points: 06
Comments:


13
our first date -
making that nervous call
...as our son does tonight
-- John McDonald Edinburgh Scotland
Votes: 22**** Points: 06
Comments:


15
taking back
my maiden name -
my hearted i's
--Susan Burch Hagerstown, MD, USA
Votes: 112*** Points: 06
Comments:


16
placid pool-
rain drops ripple my
new wrinkles
--Yesha Shah India
Votes: 131*** Points: 05
Comments:


17
hindsight...
the need to find fault
with myself
--Shrikaanth Krishnamurthy Birmingham, UK
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:


18
building once
a Lego house
now the real one
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 32**** Points: 07
Comments: a simple image well built.

2 comments:

  1. CKK welcomes: two new players; Devin Harrison, Susan Burch . To view our very first kukai CLICK HERE
    Thanks everyone for another successful kukai.
    Please continue to post your 'afterwords' here, or at the group at Facebook
    much love
    gillena cox, founder/co-ordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai

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  2. 1. Apologies to all CKK players in this CKK #53, for entries picked up late and not included to the voting list

    2. Apology to the first place winner the first total posted was 17 however the correct score is 23 (a 1vote 6pt although posted had not been counted in the first posting)

    3. Thanks to those players who prompted me to correct edits

    much love
    gillena

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