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1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers
Players: 1. Ajaya Mahala, India; 2. Claude Lopez-Ginisty, Switzerland; 3. Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania; 4. Devin Harrison, Canada; 5. Diane Mayr, USA; 6. Tomasz Szymczak, Poland; 7. Ana Drobot, Romania; 8. Mary T. Stella, Rome; 9. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 10. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 11. William Kenney, USA; 12. Tomislav Maretić, Croatia; 13. Rita Odeh, Israel; 14. Edward Beach, UK; 15. Magda Sobieszek, Poland; 16. Gabriel Sawicki, Poland; 17. Keith A. Simmonds, France; 18. Richard Jodoin, Canada; 19. Christine L. Villa, USA; 20. Simon Hanson, Australia; 21. Billy Antonio, Phillipines; 22.Dan Yu Ilan, Romania 23. Quentin Clingerman, USA; 24 Florin C Florian, Romania; 25 Robert Bilinski, Canada
FIRST PLACE
13
windy day-
the dance of a bee
deep in a bud
--Rita Odeh Haifa Israel
Votes: 49**** Points: 22
Comments:
SECOND PLACE
15
candlelight
my shadow learns
new dance moves
--Magda Sobieszek
Votes: 76**** Points: 19
Comments:
21
first dance
the girl stares at
her new pair of shoes
--Billy Antonio
Votes: 651*** Points: 19
Comments: the emotion of a first dance; the girl stares at her shoes, waiting gladly for this occasion and perhaps a bit unsure of herself.
THIRD PLACE
11
unheard melodies
in the summer wind
shadows dancing
--Bill Kenney USA
Votes: 56**** Points: 17
Comments:
RESULTS CONTINUES
1
winged termites -
vigorous rain dance
till death
--Ajaya Mahala, Pune, India
Votes: 1***** Points: 1
Comments:
2
Statues suddenly
Moving alive with music
That's what dancing is
--Claude Lopez-Ginisty
Votes: ****** Points: 0
Comments:
3
head over heels
step dancing
in the sand
--Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania
Votes: *1**** Points: 2
Comments:
4
in a dream
still wishing she could dance
my dead mother
--Devin Harrison - Vancouver Island Canada
Votes: 31**** Points: 5
Comment: the classically strong haiku, contrasting death and some elements of life; very catharctic and tragic; the impact remains long after reading it.
5
his mirrored reflection
--the only person who'll
ever see him dance
--Diane
Votes: 111***Points: 6
Comments:
6
summer dancing
the closer the hotter
earth around the sun
--Tomasz Szymczak, Chojnice, Poland
Votes: **1***Points: 3
Comments:
7
raindrops on the steel
windowsill -
practising tango step
--Ana Drobot
Votes: 52****Points: 9
Comments:
8
small steps of dance
my life in the rhythm of clock
Four Seasons
--Mary T. Stella, Rome
Votes: **1***Points: 3
Comments:
9
Sunset, girl's milking
the cow with a crumpled horn -
lake mirror's dance feedback
--sTOPs, Bucharest, Romania
Votes: ****** Points: 0
Comments:
10
shrove monday
a pink princess waltzes
to her own song
--ralf bröker
Votes: 31**** Points: 5
Comments:
12
applause -
the painting bellies
of the dancers
--Tomislav Maretić
Votes: *1**** Points: 2
Comments:
14
all night
two stepping the blues
winter moon
--Edward Beach Bristol, UK
Votes: 3***** Points: 3
Comments:
16
red haired dancer
tangled in her curls
sunset light
--Gabriel Sawicki
Votes: 42**** Points: 8
Comments: Comment: optical illusion haiku; we also feel an energetic Irish dancer.
17
hypnotic vibes
of the masqueraders' band...
dance of the tourists
--Keith A. SIMMONDS Rodez, FRANCE
Votes: 11**** Points: 3
Comments:
18
In the winter night
accompanied by a snowplow
dancing snowflakes
--Richard Jodoin (Montréal, Canada)
Votes: 13***** Points: 7
Comments:
19
moonlight dance
on the bedroom floor . . .
orchid breeze
--Christine L. Villa, USA
Votes: 41**** Points: 6
Comment: the smell of orchid remains after the dance moves.
20
rainbow glitter
a silver sequined
arabesque
--Simon Hanson
Votes: **2*** Points: 6
Comments:
22
prom –
drawing on the high school wall
two entwined hearts
--D. Yu Lian
Votes: *2**** Points: 4
Comments:
23
Stay with the rhythem
Sing along with the music
Move your feet lightly
--Quentin Clingerman
Votes: ****** Points: 0
Comments:
24
drought....
the beggar murmurs
dancing in the rain
--Florin C.
Votes: 2*1*** Points: 5
Comments:
25
Outside the cold squall
Making the snowflakes swirl round
Inside the music
--Robert Bininski
Votes: *1**** Points: 2
Comments: good image - needs fewer words
I welcome all those who participated for the first time in our Caribbean Kigo Kukai; sorry this is our last one; view our very first in 2009. Thanks again to everyone who was a part of this beautiful, wonderful haiku journey.
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gillena cox(Founder/Coordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai)
Blessings, Gillena, and thanks for all you do.
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