Saturday, January 22, 2011

CKK #20 Results


Caribbean Kigo Kukai #20 Results
(comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated)


Players:1. Nakamura Sakuon, Japan; 2. Karol Rosiak, Poland; 3. Quentin Clingerman, USA; 4. Flory Brick, USA; 5. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 6. Diane Mayr, USA; 7. Taro Kunugi, Japan; 8. Juhani Tikkanen, Finland; 9. William Kenney, USA; 10. Cara Holman, USA; 11. Keith A. Simmonds, T & T; 12. John McDonald, Scotland; 13. Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, Romania; 14. George Hawkins, XXX; 15. Bouwe Brouwer, The Netherlands; 16. Andrzej Dembonczyk, Silesia, Poland; 17. Gheorghe Postelnicu , Romania; 18. Marleen Hulst,The Netherlands; 19. Magdalena Dale, Romania; 20. Margaret Dornaus, USA; 21. Krzysztof Kokot, Poland ; 22. Jacek Margolak; Poland; 23. Melissa Allen, USA; 24.Sanjukta Asopa, Karnataka, India; 25. Cezar-Florian Ciobîca; 26. Franklin Magalhaes, Rio de Janeiro;



#15 FIRST PLACE

east wind
the paper-thin days
of the calendar
--Bouwe Brouwer; The Netherlands
Votes:432*** Points:16
Comment:1- "paper-thin days" is imaginative and witty.
Comment:2- nice image



#14 & #22 SECOND PLACE

14
new calendar
my wife takes
all the dates
--George Hawkins
Votes:821*** Points:15
Comments: minimalist and humorous


22
winter evening-
the wall's whiteness under
old calendar
--Jacek Margolak; POLAND
Votes:441*** Points:15
Comments:



#16 THIRD PLACE

twelve new birds
in the ornithological lab -
new calendar
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Silesia, Poland
Votes:54**** Points:13
Comments:



RESULTS CONTINUES

1
New calendar / counting holidays / and festival days
Kokko ( Sakuo )
Votes:1***** Points:01
Comments:



2
a new calendar
I look at days
that will come
--Karol Rosiak, Poland
Votes:11**** Points:03
Comments:



3
The days are numbered
Events are marked out in full
Calendar ready
--Quentin Clingerman
Votes:****** Points:00
Comments:



4
year of the rabbit
started snowing
current calendar
--flory
Votes:****** Points:00
Comments:



5
mother's calendar
the orignal colour
of the wall
--Ralf
Votes:111*** Points:06
Comments:



6
online calendar
gone is the satisfaction
of discarding a year
--Diane
Votes:2***** Points:02
Comments:



7
as I uncurl
fresh smell of ink and paper
the new calender
--Taro
Votes:4***** Points:04
Comments:



8
burning trashes --
old calendar
waiting it's turn
--Juhani Tikkanen
Votes:21**** Points:04
Comments:



9
a breeze ruffles
the calendar leaves
January thaw
--BILL KENNEY
Votes:1***** Points:01
Comments:



10
setting the date-
side by side
we compare calendars
-- Cara Holman
Votes:34**** Points:11
Comment:1- Rather prosaic, but in a way that suits the subject: However important, romantic, exciting the date, the calendar is king. Comment:2- clever image



11
one day at a time
my New Year's resolutions...
a calendar
Keith A. SIMMONDS;T & T
Votes:42**** Points:08
Comments:



12
calendar:
days
awaiting fulfilment
--John McDonald
Votes:23**** Points:08
Comments:



13
wardrobe door -
mothballs hang over
the old calendar
--Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
Votes:31**** Points:05
Comments:



17
first five black crosses
on the PEACEwar calendar -
AFGAN ALL QUIET!
--STOPSY
Votes:****** Points:00
Comments:



18
birthday calendar
the tiny cross
behind her name now
--Marleen Hulst; The Netherlands
Votes:3*2*** Points:09
Comments: I would have voted for this one if line 3 had read: “behind her name” or “beside her name” without the “now”



19
Leaf after leaf
falling to the ground…
the calendar
--Magdalena Dale - Romania
Votes:52**** Points:09
Comments:I like the play on "leaf." Purists may object to the extended moment.



20.
pocket calendar—
filling in the blank spaces
of her memory
--Margaret Dornaus
Votes:34**** Points:11
Comments:Effectively understated pathos, with a hint of humor. Imagine, 365 days full of senior moments. But, of course, there's sadness here, too.



21
twins-
in the old calendar
question mark
--Krzysztof Kokot PL
Votes:1***** Points:01
Comments:I would have voted for this one if line 3 had read: “a question mark”.



23
January
not knowing what to do
with the old calendar
-- Melissa Allen, USA
Votes:31**** Points:05
Comments:



24
early
bed of crocuses-
the new calendar
--sanjuktaa; Karnataka, India
Votes:1***** Points:01
Comments:



25
only one date
circled in her calendar –
the 11th september
--Cezar-Florian Ciobîca
Votes:21**** Points:04
Comments:I like this, but find the last line confusing. It sounds as if it’s 11th anniversary vs. September 11th? Maybe it is? A bit too ambiguous.



26
Calendar –
our life attached
to a convention
--Franklin Magalhães; Rio de Janeiro - Brasil
Votes:21**** Points:04
Comments:

2 comments:

  1. CKK Welcomes Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu; George Hawkins; Karol Rosiak, and Margaret Dornaus

    CKK #20 Is the first Kukai for the new year 2011; 26 entries were received and voted on; all participants voted

    Thanks for the continuing success of Caribbean Kigo Kukai

    much love
    gillena

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