Thursday, April 25, 2013

CKK #41 Results


1.None of the comments are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers


Players: 1.Pat Geyer, USA; 2. William Kenny, USA; 3. Alegria Imperial, Phillipines; 4. John McDonald, Scotland; 5. Tatjana Debeljacki, Serbia; 6. Lavana Kray, Romania; 7. Eduard Tara, Romania; 8. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 9. Rita Odeh, Israel; 10. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 11. Marie-Alice Maire; France; 12. Claude Lopez-Ginisty, Switzerland; 13. Andrzej Dembonczyk, Poland; 14. Gabriel Sawicki, Poland; 15. Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines; 16. Robert Kania, Poland; 17. Ana-MariaTrandafir, Romania; 18. Diane Mayr, USA; 19. Sandi Pray, USA; 20. Magdalena Dale - Romania; 21.Cezar F. Ciobîca, Romania; 22. Bouwe Brouwer, The Netherlands


FIRST PLACE

11
the closed door
back to my childhood...
key under a stone.
-- Marie-Alice Maire; France
Votes:553*** Points: 24



SECOND PLACE

18
beach stone...
the years spent smoothing
his edges
--Diane Mayr, writer
Votes:271*** Points: 19
Comments: A plausible and powerful juxtaposition, opening a range of intriguing
possibilities about the relationship of the speaker to the guy with the edges.



THIRD PLACE

2
sitting on this stone
where a wall used to be . . .
the gentle rain
--Bill Kenney
Votes:341*** Points: 14
Comments :



RESULTS CONTINUES

1
royal it has risen
from behind a stone...
pasque flower
--Pat Geyer, East Brunswick, NJ USA
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :


3
spring mist--
stones rearrange places
in the empty tomb
--Alegria Imperial
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :


4
the mason smiles Godlike -
lion and lamb
from the same stone
--John McDonald Edinburgh Scotland
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :


5
rusted metal
engraving the tone the letter
in the stone
--Tatjana Debeljacki
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :


6
storm throwing a stone
against my window -
chipped moon
--lavana kray
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :


7
Stone garden –
surrounding a plum petal
with sand ripples
--Eduard Tara, Romania
Votes:1***** Points: 01
Comments :


8
jumping over water
the stone
and I
--Ralf Bröker
Votes:132*** Points: 13
Comments :


9
etched on
a smooth stone...
the sun
--Rita Odeh Nazareth, Israel
Votes:43**** Points: 10
Comments :


10
rolling down blue
from sky onto bear's eyes -
rolling stones too
--STOPS
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :


12
On Easter morning
The heavy stone was removed
And Life's eternal
--Claude Lopez-Ginisty
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :


13
relaxing music -
on a woman back
basalt stones
--Andrzej Dembonczyk, Silesia
Votes:12**** Points: 05
Comments :


14
midsummer dusk
still warm
the gravestone
--Gabriel Sawicki (Wroclaw, Poland)
Votes:2*2*** Points: 08
Comments :


15
Easter Sunday...
who will roll away the stone
trapped inside my body?
--Ernesto P. Santiago,Philippines
Votes:1*1*** Points: 04
Comments :


16
how can I wander?
I have never seen how moss
has covered the stone
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes:****** Points: 00
Comments :


17
no stone left unturned
til He was found and felt
in the blossom breeze
--Ana-MariaTrandafir
Votes:*1**** Points: 02
Comments :


19
stone garden -
with or without me
dandelions
--Sandi Pray
Robbinsville, NC, USA
Votes:331*** Points: 12
Comments: The hardness of stone, the softness of dandelions, and the wry acceptance of
"with or without me" add up to a most engaging combination.


20
breath of wind
over the mother's tombstone
a butterfly
--Magdalena Dale - Romania
http://tankadream.blogspot.com/
Votes:111*** Points: 06
Comments :


21
spring fever -
rewriting my mother's name
on the gravestone
--Cezar F. Ciobîca
Votes:32**** Points: 07
Comments :


22
the wind flutters
between the gravestones -
distant landslide
--bouwe brouwer
Votes:2***** Points: 02
Comments :

4 comments:

  1. CKK welcomes:- Marie-Alice Maire and Ana-MariaTrandafir. Thank you for joining us, we hope to see many more of your haiku listed here. To view our very first kukai CLICK HERE

    Thanks to all player for making Kukai #41 a success

    Condolences to Chrissi Villa on the passing of her husband Giovan (April 1946-April 2013)

    much love
    gillena cox; founder/co-ordinator Caribbean Kigo Kukai

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